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- An Umbrella For Two -

The faces are lifted towards heaven Rain falls like tears from a grieving sky The perfect moment Under an umbrella for two You will see that the sky is singing and shelves every moment on this earth 01.04.2014 A-L Andresen :) Contest Name Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" Sponsor Leonora Galinta Deadline 4/23/2014 (3 th in the contest)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:31:00 PM

PART 2....I don't read and comment so ppl comment on my stuff. I Think poets could actually learn if they took the time to read the works of other writers. That's why I am here. So, thanks for sharing here under the umbrella of your words! Hopefully you don't get sick of my two cents worth on your stuff. I really am impressed and will carry on until my time runs out tonight!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 6:25:00 AM

- 2 - If all were quite similar to each other, it would be boring - Some write so "deep" that I do not understand what they are writing about :))) - But, as you say ... we are here to learn - I am happy that you chose my poem - Thank you, JSL !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:25:00 PM

With time on my side, and bad weather in my skies this fine Saturday, something inside told me to PICK a POET and read till ya' bleed. THEN, the tough part was how to pick from all the poets. SO, I randomly clicked on one of your comments which took me to your poems, and I GOT HOOKED! I figure, you spent all the time and effort writing these, I might as well dive in and read em', What better way to get to know a poet. Besides, I don't really care that not many ppl read my stuff on here.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 6:20:00 AM

- I'm pleasantly surprised :))) - You've spent a lot of time on my poems - Highly appreciate your visit - I used to call my poems for "small kitchen table poems" - Writing from my heart and the things that occupy me in worldview - use simple words - I am in essence not so concerned about how others write - everyone is different -

John Beam

Date: 4/11/2014 4:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading some of your poetry, this afternoon and belated congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2014 3:14:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, John. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Toil

Date: 4/10/2014 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful rendering of a tender moment. I especially like the last line and your novel use of the word "shelves". Very creative. ...Sam

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2014 6:55:00 AM

- A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Sam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ariana Petrin

Date: 4/5/2014 8:32:00 PM

Thanks For Your Help...I Enjoy Your Poems It Shows Love And Enjoyment Of Being On This Earth...Ariana

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2014 6:26:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments,Ariana :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:54:00 PM

I loved this poem, I think I will go buy an umbrella and hope for rain! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2014 6:00:00 AM

- Buy one for me too. . . I have no umbrella :))) - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2014 8:58:00 PM

Anne-lise, congrats on your win with this simply sweet poem! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2014 5:55:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Kim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2014 10:25:00 PM

ANNE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2014 2:47:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2014 2:51:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, This is so beautiful. I love your description of rain as tears from the sky. Congratulations on your win! Love, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2014 2:47:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Carolyn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2014 12:31:00 PM

Anne, :) Congratulations, wonderful winning Umbrella poem. Enjoyed my BFF's winning list..... luv LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:54:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2014 10:26:00 AM

this was really a champ poem, anne...congrats and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:53:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/3/2014 7:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win. You found a beautiful moment to share in the rain. Loved it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:53:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/3/2014 6:14:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise Congratulations! The sky is singing! So original! Your poems always sing! Hugs from Texas, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:51:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Theresa Stephens

Date: 4/3/2014 5:21:00 AM

Hi, Congrats on your win. Clever choice of words to describe a moment in the rain. Regards Theresa xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:51:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Theresa. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2014 4:57:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:50:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2014 10:52:00 PM

I see you won!! Congratulations to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:24:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/2/2014 7:03:00 PM

A very sweet and romantic poem. This was a lovely write, Anne Lise, and I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/2/2014 6:44:00 PM

Enjoyed reading, A-L, Congrats on the win!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Jag. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2014 2:59:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..I feel that it is somewhat sad..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:22:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/2/2014 1:13:00 PM

Great love under an umbrella. Lucky they are those who enjoy such moment. Genius simply, my lovely friend. Congrats too. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 1:21:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, my good friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/2/2014 1:07:00 PM

Beautiful Anne! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 1:20:00 PM

- A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments, Keith :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/2/2014 12:52:00 PM

A sweet write and win! Big congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 1:18:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Cecilia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/2/2014 10:39:00 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Anne Lise ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 11:12:00 AM

Thank u so much for my win, dear friend Leonora ! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2014 1:35:00 AM

very nice, Anne lise! good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:13:00 AM

- A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/1/2014 11:37:00 PM

I have enjoyed this moment several times being under an umbrella for two under the rain...couple of times in the pouring rain! You have impressed me by the splendor of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece this evening! What a delightful write, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 2:12:00 AM

- A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Russell :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)