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13.06.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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The clockwork the most complex Older sprockets, need life cycle oils Awareness the vitality is impaired - ready to do whatever it takes follow the advice of the doctor positively for health

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/21/2024 8:06:00 AM

Our grandfather clock took 4 months in a clock hospital to get better, as for doctors who diagnosis humans, i have become a little skeptical of their assessment of us, and i mean specialists, except for one who has known our family for 40 years, reaching back to my mom and dad and then us. Letting them deal with a life death situation would be a twofold crisis! - a clever write dear Anne-Lise. Love and blessings, Jennifer.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/22/2024 10:55:00 PM

Wonderful writing and true. Much love and God bless you always, Gina

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/22/2024 7:27:00 AM

Anne-Lise, You have me thinking about my brain and the wheels turning inside. Your suggestion is on target....we need to take care of ourselves so we can run well for as ling as possible and keep accurate time.

James Horn

Date: 6/20/2024 9:05:00 AM

You have quite a reading group. Read my latest Willi Mays poem.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2024 3:30:00 AM

Great write, Anne Lise. Goes to the heart.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/15/2024 3:26:00 PM

Indeed lovely write Anne-Lise many blessings

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/14/2024 9:25:00 PM

I can relate well to this, my dear. Tilt takes its toll. Hope all is well.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/14/2024 12:10:00 PM

This is a well written view of clocks and health. I smiled a bit wondering how a robot would comment, perhaps he would praise the new socket. As for me, I already have more than one doctor, some being specialists. It's best to take good care.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/14/2024 10:48:00 AM

Nice portrayal of aging with the old clock. We all need medicine to survive.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/14/2024 8:43:00 AM

The mind is willing...but the body says, later my friend -- time for rest and relaxation. Doctors may not always know what is best...but they are always worth listening too. Blessings my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2024 11:02:00 PM

How unique this is, Anne- a visual delight as well...you have transformed well on my 4 years of absence on soup...it's nice reading you again...huggs

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/13/2024 10:59:00 PM

so wise and precious, doctors are necessary when comme the age have a sweet week end

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2024 5:15:00 PM

An engaging poem about aging well. Anne-Lise. Self-care, medical advice, and proactive health maintenance are well stressed.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2024 2:38:00 PM

I can relate Anne-Lise as I've a tough 3 weeks with illness and lost my muse but i am fighting back! I think i need and MOT and oiling lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Woody

Date: 6/13/2024 1:45:00 PM

Heck, I turned 33 last week. True story...