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- Absence of Complication -

"in the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories; above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind" quiescent sentiments encompass, bestowing sonorous serendipity- susurrations resounding in light, dusk left rhapsodic; dawn, a vestige of harmony left b r e a t h l e s s by beautiful balance, essence of dulcet moments rescued me- resplendent radiance of magical resonance; fearing not what lies ahead but walking toward mellifluous fields, chartreuse blades blooming on maple trees… as i am left whispering hope in the breeze a myriad of emotions crowded my intellect, now i am soft spoken and relieved- aromatic autumn air alleviates my anguish, for seasons change- and so did i in the absence of complication, i worry not- for time is on my side and i am forever freed from the cynical soul i used to wear like silk, feeding off what could have been- (might have been) life has bestowed pain- but all the hardships of trials and tribulations are distant memories i shan't forget- for they brought closure, and i am forever bound to a grateful heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *inspired by Silent One's contest* 11.15.19 -luloo

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/15/2019 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations on having this beautiful poem at the top of the best new poems list Luloo. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo

Lu Loo
Date: 12/19/2019 1:35:00 PM

thank you sweet Connie! x:-)-luloo

James Inman

Date: 12/14/2019 11:18:00 AM

Beautiful Lu Loo, I dream of a day when I can feel this way.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/14/2019 1:15:00 PM

thank you dear James, you will I'm sure- be blessed...x:-)-luloo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/13/2019 6:51:00 PM

This is brilliantly beautiful, LuLoo:) and I love your use of alliteration... congratulations on this being the no. 1 poem in the top 100:) good job:)) may this season of joy bring you God's grace and blessings:)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/14/2019 1:15:00 PM

thank you lovely Jo, I hope all is well with you, miss ya x:-)-luloo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/13/2019 2:41:00 PM

Way to go Lu Lu. #1 in the top 100. Hugs Rick! A stunning write.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 4:41:00 PM

thank you dear Rick, be blessed x:-)-luloo

Lu Loo

Date: 12/13/2019 12:09:00 PM

I will say this to all who wish to listen. This poem was totally inspired by Silent One. His opening stanza amazed me and my muse took off like wildfire. Thank you SO for your inspiration, I am grateful. x:-)-luloo

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/13/2019 5:08:00 AM

Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Lu Loo - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:18:00 AM

thank you dear friend, Merry Christmas to you and yours...x:-)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/13/2019 2:32:00 AM

This is beautifully composed Luloo and deserving of your First Place win. Congratulations. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:17:00 AM

awww! I love that Mele Kalilimaka to you too lovely Connie. Thank you x:-)-luloo

Terri Stiles

Date: 12/12/2019 6:41:00 PM

Oustanding and thoughtful. Kudos on being #1.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:16:00 AM

thank you sweet Terri x:-)-luloo

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/12/2019 6:16:00 PM

you have the depth of thought and a passion to explore it, well-done dear poet, really well done...congrats on being number 1

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:16:00 AM

thank you dear Frederic, you have always inspired me..x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 12/12/2019 8:44:00 AM

Now it's the number 1 best poem, congrats!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:15:00 AM

I didn't know until you! Thank you once again, I am honored. x:-)-luloo

Na Na

Date: 12/11/2019 7:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Laura

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:15:00 AM

many thanks dear Greg x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 12/11/2019 10:29:00 AM

You were smart to enter this beauty Laura you knew how much I loved it, it gets better every read, you have an amazing talent!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/13/2019 7:15:00 AM

oh my, I thought I already thanked you! I apologize, I must be losing it! thank you so much and I am honored dear John...be blessed always x:-)-luloo

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/5/2019 9:56:00 AM

Very well written. I can relate. Adding to favs!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/8/2019 12:43:00 PM

many thanks sweet Juliet (your name is beautiful btw) x:-)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2019 3:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:05:00 AM

many thanks sweet Smile x:-)-luloo

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/1/2019 11:29:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS FOR GREAT WIN. Love.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:04:00 AM

thank you sweet Anisha! x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 12/1/2019 7:16:00 PM

This is one of your best Laura...gotta fave this beauty! Congrats on a great win!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:04:00 AM

you are awesome, thank you dear John x:-)-luloo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/1/2019 4:51:00 PM

‘Tis wonderful, Luloo! I love: a myriad of emotions crowded my intellect,/ now I am soft spoken and relieved-/ aromatic autumn air alleviates my anguish,/ for seasons change- and so did I/ Congratulations on your win, Luloo!

Na Na

Date: 12/1/2019 3:46:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Lu Loo

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:04:00 AM

many thanks dear Greg x:-)-luloo

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/1/2019 3:26:00 PM

this was an outstanding write by you my sweet friend... congratulations on your top win :) hugs

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:04:00 AM

many thanks sweet Sandy- :):):) -luloo

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2019 3:01:00 PM

Lulu you out did yourself here... i had no idea this was written by you, as it is so different from your normal style... i like the alliteration.. your opening thee stanza are just brilliant.. possibly my fave poem by you.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:03:00 AM

wow I am almost shocked because this was so intense to write SO. And I am honored because you are one of the best and you liked it. Thank you very much, I am grateful. x:-)-luloo

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/16/2019 5:32:00 AM

Thanks for this piece of yours, full of prudence midst spirit of hope. God bless you. (Your artwork is now displayed in my ministerial office. With its message, "The LORD is my shepherd," I'm indeed gratefully inspired. Thanks for such gift. I hope that you read the email I sent you on November 14, the day I received your package). God bless you.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:02:00 AM

I am so happy you like it and the fact it is displayed at your wonderful church makes me even happier. I smiled when I read this! You are a blessing, thank you x:-)-luloo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2019 11:40:00 PM

Enjoyed this and it's a sure winner. Love to you, Gina

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:01:00 AM

thank you so much RR, you delight me x:-)-luloo

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/15/2019 5:17:00 PM

really like your take on this contest...it's called wisdom..some find it, some don't...you found it my poetic friend...

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:01:00 AM

thank you sweet man, as always you are sweet x:-)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/15/2019 12:49:00 PM

I am glad to see this "time is on my side and I am forever freed from the cynical soul I used to wear like silk, feeding off what could have been- " I said hello to my beautiful plaques today before I left for work. Your arts are amazing, Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2019 9:00:00 AM

awww so glad you like to say hello to them! You deserve them...thank you sweet Caren x:-)-luloo