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- a Twelve Months Pregnancy -

Hello January
     A whole year is over 
     A pregnancy of twelve months 
     with all the symptoms 
     Time is running like a marathon 
     The birth is started 
     The new year is here 
     again with new hope 
     expectations- joy and tears 
     Burning colorful stars 
     flashes in our eyes 
     Fireworks in the sky 
     like the sunlight
     gives a warm pleasure 
     Just a few seconds 
     All the church bells ringing 
     Smile ... kisses and hugs 
     We are ready - we are waiting  
     Please welcome the newborn year 




Sponsor:Vicky Tsiluma
Contest Name:Hello January 
Deadline:2/1/2014 12:00:00 AM



18.01.2014
A-L  Andresen :)

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Gail Debole Date: 3/12/2014 5:24:00 PM Excellent title. The way you express this concept is charming and so creatively honest! - Love, Gail Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2014 3:35:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gail. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule Date: 2/15/2014 2:39:00 PM Fireworks in the sky, i loved that stanza and yes New resolutions, Like mine is to complete my screenplay, Already im writing my third movie.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2014 4:30:00 PM - Thanks for the S-mail. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2014 4:29:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Good luck with your work,Bryan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins Date: 2/1/2014 8:59:00 AM Oh my gosh Anne Lise - Your words sing in this creative gem. I love 12 month pregnancy. Bravo! love, Kathy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2014 9:29:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kathryn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden Date: 2/1/2014 5:30:00 AM Loved your metaphor. Didn't know what to expect and was swept away by the beauty of your message. A wonderful write sweetie. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2014 6:26:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/31/2014 10:03:00 PM This is a very original piece. I had no idea what to expect from the Title, and my curiosity was pleasantly rewarded!! A great poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2014 6:25:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson Date: 1/29/2014 3:16:00 AM When I saw the headline I thought , ''Never '' That poor woman . lol Delighted I opened the poem . Thoroughly enjoyed it . Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2014 3:21:00 AM ....lol.. - Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Rogers Date: 1/28/2014 12:18:00 AM Very nice metaphor, you had me going for a minute!...smile. Nice work! Anne -Lise xoxoxo Robert Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2014 2:51:00 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin Date: 1/24/2014 2:19:00 PM Leaving 2013 exhausted but the baby is beautiful, just like your poetry! Hugs, chuck Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2014 2:20:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 1/24/2014 7:19:00 AM This is very creative. Great comparison between birth and a new year. Should do well in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2014 11:57:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 1/23/2014 7:03:00 AM An excellent creative write!!! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 7:54:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Pace INK. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deepak Chalise Date: 1/23/2014 6:56:00 AM The way you put words for new year is welcoming. INCLINATION TOWRADS SPIRIT AND LOVE IS LIFE.This is the hub of poem how a poet adorns it. I loved very much. . Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 7:54:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Deepak. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson Date: 1/22/2014 5:11:00 PM a very different new year concept... very well done too xoxox Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 2:13:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/22/2014 4:42:00 PM Nice way to bring in Jan. and a new year. I have been good so far this year from my winter flu. I am hopeful this will be a new and well year for me. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 2:13:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/22/2014 3:27:00 PM Very good AnneLise. I do welcome the baby new year. I hope you a year full of blessings.... Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2014 2:12:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/21/2014 8:40:00 AM Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 8:42:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 1/21/2014 8:23:00 AM this is excellent Anne Lise it brought some much needed sunshine Shadow x smile hug Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 8:28:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway Date: 1/21/2014 6:37:00 AM Awesome piece friend Anne :) ;) Congratulations on your win. I been very busy these past few days due to the deadline of my final exam. Miss to read some of your poems. Happy New year. hugs :) ;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 6:44:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2014 10:38:00 PM I hope this one placed for you. I just saw the contest was judged. it sure is a delightful and creative poem in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 3:30:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Orozco Date: 1/20/2014 10:06:00 PM Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 3:29:00 AM :)

Edward Orozco Date: 1/20/2014 9:16:00 PM Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 3:29:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Edward. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/20/2014 6:20:00 PM A firework of a poem! Joyful and captivating, hopeful and thought provoking. Yes, we should celebrate each year since we are alive! Excellent work ! Good luck dear Anne Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2014 3:28:00 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kaye S- Date: 1/20/2014 3:35:00 PM I never thought of it that way, you are so right. Hopefully this new born year grows into a healthy and vibrant one. Thanks for passing by my poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2014 3:38:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kaye. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faaiqah Abader Date: 1/20/2014 3:05:00 PM Well-done Anne-Lise, a lovely poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2014 3:07:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Faaiqah. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit Date: 1/20/2014 12:30:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2014 2:01:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 1/20/2014 12:11:00 PM Congrats on a fine win Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2014 2:02:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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