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Hills come alive with sweet sounds of birds whistling tunes Filled with harmonious peace, you sail within time Gentle whispering winds through branches of trees call When you dare to take the first step forward Everything feels so easy embracing such beauty Mixing voices of nature talk deeply flowering Thrown into the unknown life is truly magical A universe inside feelings explode in one gift The soul eclipsing delight warmed with sunshine rays Like a virgin being on guard of the tiger claws, lions, bears and snakes Only when your starlight kisses clouds evaporate Time continues and the butterfly waltzes freely once more Crossing paths in this journey new beginnings grow Small wild strawberries threaded upon a stem beg to taste Opening one gateway within thoughts Setting sail into another world beyond With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength A cool breeze says goodbye upon your cheek Loving spices land this boat on paradise sands where gold sparkles warm beams When we meet at Heaven's gate batting lashes close entering a doorway into a dream Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 05.09.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/25/2017 11:07:00 AM
Given a 7, complimenting the style and enchanting phrases, I see Liam's footprints all over the place.
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Date: 10/7/2015 11:57:00 AM
Feel the love and the love of nature on this wonderful poem. Awesome. love pyl
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:31:00 PM
- Dear Phyllis, always a pleasure to share with good friends - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2015 7:08:00 PM
So very beautiful!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:31:00 PM
- Thank you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2015 4:14:00 AM
Very good and very lovely x Wendy
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Date: 9/19/2015 1:14:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2015 2:53:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:54:00 PM
- Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2015 11:05:00 AM
Good morning Anne Lise and Liam, I so love this beautiful write. Congrats on POD to you both. I love how the imagery just brings you along on such a wonderful journey of love and nature.... Sharon
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:38:00 AM
- Sharon, always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/14/2015 2:35:00 PM
Hey Anne Lise and Limam, A very hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW!! Such a beautiful, sweet piece on love and intimacy back dropped in the beauty and imagery of Nature. Great expression and well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:37:00 AM
- Always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats, Neva :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 5:45:00 PM
congrats on poem of the week so good to read this again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:12:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 2:40:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A very beautiful love poem collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 9/13/2015 2:53:00 PM
- Always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats, Dorian :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 1:54:00 PM
also i would like to thank you all for the heartfelt wonderful comments wishing you all a blessed day
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:52:00 PM
congratulations anne lise your words shone the gold in this piece smiling wishing you a blessed beautiful day
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Date: 9/13/2015 2:00:00 PM
- I share this pleasure with you, my friend Liam ..... without you .... it would be a bad poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 12:54:00 PM
Back to congratulate you both for your POTW, Anne and Liam! hugs!
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:15:00 PM
- Thanks Kim, you're always welcome back - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 10:55:00 AM
Anne- Lise and Liam, congratulations on having this piece selected as the poem of the week:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:13:00 PM
- P.o.t.w. almost like birthday and Christmas Eve in one day :) - Thanks Alexis and specially thanks to Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2015 9:41:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! My earlier comments on this poem on Sept 6th are in totally the same with my feelings today on the wonderfully powerful message of this poem and its descriptive imagery. Congratulations on POTW!! Very-Well Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:09:00 PM
- Dear Gary, this was great :) - really glad that this was chosen as the POTW - Thanks to you and specially thanks to Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2015 12:38:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam, excellent collab from both of you...!! keep it 'em coming.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 9/10/2015 3:14:00 AM
- Olive, thanks from both Liam and me for enjoyable visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2015 12:55:00 PM
What a beautiful collab, I love how it was constructed... Great job both.......A.M.
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Date: 9/9/2015 4:14:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2015 9:13:00 AM
Zzzz hot collaboration Anne Lise! If there is a different story here than what I'm reading; 'my bad'...*smiles* I simply loved it....and to mine faves if'n ya don't mind! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:38:00 AM
- A pleasure and honor that you will "fav" our poem, James - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2015 8:04:00 AM
Another beautiful collaboration. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, without readers my poems would "die" - Always nice to see you, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2015 4:23:00 AM
Lovely and romantic, your collab is more fluidthan ever. Hugs to you both, Liam and Anne!
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Date: 9/7/2015 8:02:00 AM
- Kim , thank you for your visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2015 2:45:00 PM
thank you everyone for the deeply warm beautiful touching comments wishing you all a great week ahead with blessings
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Date: 9/7/2015 8:05:00 AM
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Date: 9/6/2015 2:43:00 PM
your pen anne lise sparkled thank you kindly for sharing pens truly a pleasure as always wishing you a blessed beautiful day
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Date: 9/7/2015 7:59:00 AM
- Thank the same to you my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2015 12:52:00 PM
You are getting very good at the collaborative efforts..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:56:00 PM
- Sara, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2015 12:21:00 PM
The flow of your wonderful write goes smoothly within the heart of the readers.... It depicted vivid imagery that brought your piece to life. I inhale its scent, it intoxicates me.....love always........A.M.
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Beautiful words, warms my heart - thank you, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2015 6:55:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! A most outstanding free verse adventure here for sure with the marvelous imagery and sublimely descriptive message of "A One Way Ticket." I can sum up your co-write here in one definitive word: "Brilliant." This one's a "7" and going my Book of FAVs!! Congratulations of a most wondrously-conceived write!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:26:00 AM
Please always continue writing Dear Anne-Lise!! You have the Golden Pen of an Angel!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:06:00 AM
- I love this "Book of Fav" :))) - thank you my good friend Gary, always enjoyable with positive and lovely comments ...... your words mean a lot to me - it gives me pleasure to continue writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2015 5:56:00 AM
soulful write that uplifts, dear anne.. another beautiful collab as i wish you sunday's best!.. huggs
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:07:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to share with good friends - thank you, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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