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- A Lonely Path With You In Heart -

 


Listening to your voice whispering
The moon is my mentor
With the search of your aura and pounding heart
The answer to this makes all the difference
Because my longing sings about my dear angel
Such feelings reins all my energy
No one can live among broken walls
The wind blew out the candle, chilling
In search for every space, every need and even secret dreams
As a landscape into the timeless time







10.10.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:54:00 PM
Nicely done on this poem. Keeping my comments short tonight. love phyl
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:41:00 PM
- Thanks, Phyllis (short peply :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2015 6:23:00 PM
"No one can live among broken walls" how true.... many sacred moments in this piece, Anne Lise..I like this line as well "Such feelings reins all my energy"...its emotionally draining, loneliness. We need human interaction, a soul to understand ours...the search commences.Always, Laura
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:58:00 AM
- Absolutely right, Laura :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 12:43:00 PM
A heart touching poem my lovely lovely friend read from you. Loved always,bl
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:08:00 AM
- Glad you liked this write, Bl :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2015 1:38:00 PM
Terrific write Anne Lise. Hugs
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:28:00 PM
- Thanks, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2015 6:48:00 AM
Your descriptive was conveyed in a very beautiful form....your write flows with extreme passion of love. A wonderful and an eloquent piece..............A.M.
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:34:00 PM
- Afolabi, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2015 4:07:00 AM
Anne Lise, always beautiful in writing and so is your heart..! I hope you are doing alright.. I really am busy nowadays with some personal matters! I will make it up soon as I am done with it.. =`) thank you for the comments and virtual hugs! like it!~OliveEloisa Stay blessed!
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:34:00 PM
- Olive, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2015 12:21:00 AM
Such a captivating poem, glad I had time this weekend to catch up on my reading!!!
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Date: 10/12/2015 3:05:00 AM
- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 1:50:00 PM
your angel glows with you, anne.. so beautiful for my sunday read!... bless you and huggs!
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Date: 10/12/2015 3:04:00 AM
- Thanks Nette for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 10:14:00 AM
A gem indeed Anne Lise, I love it, hope your Sunday is a brilliant one :) hugs W
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Date: 10/12/2015 3:04:00 AM
- Wilma, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 9:57:00 AM
I read this wonderful poem yesterday and was sure I commented, now I see my comment was not posted, I do not know why! I loved it! Have a wonderful Sunday, your friend, Demetrios, a seven.
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 8:10:00 AM
Annie-Lise, this is beautiful and moving, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, solitude ...
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:54:00 PM
- Thanks for visit a 7 and lovely comments, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 5:56:00 AM
Every line is wonderful, but the last line is sheer perfection. This one is a gem.
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:53:00 PM
- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, dear Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2015 1:28:00 AM
Awesome Anne-Lise this one shines way above. Enjoyed very much!
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:50:00 PM
- Michael, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2015 7:07:00 PM
so so beautiful Anne Lise :-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:49:00 PM
- Thanks for visit a 7 and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2015 1:41:00 PM
"No one can live among broken walls," my favorite line. Well done, Anne Lise.
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:49:00 PM
- Lin, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2015 1:29:00 PM
Very beautiful poem. Thanx for writing that :)
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Date: 10/11/2015 1:48:00 PM
- Neil, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)