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- a Lonely Path With You In Heart -

Listening to your voice whispering The moon is my mentor With the search of your aura and pounding heart The answer to this makes all the difference Because my longing sings about my dear angel Such feelings reins all my energy No one can live among broken walls The wind blew out the candle, chilling In search for every space, every need and even secret dreams As a landscape into the timeless time 10.10.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/8/2015 9:54:00 PM

Nicely done on this poem. Keeping my comments short tonight. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2015 12:41:00 PM

- Thanks, Phyllis (short peply :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/29/2015 6:23:00 PM

"No one can live among broken walls" how true.... many sacred moments in this piece, Anne Lise..I like this line as well "Such feelings reins all my energy"...its emotionally draining, loneliness. We need human interaction, a soul to understand ours...the search commences.Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2015 4:58:00 AM

- Absolutely right, Laura :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/27/2015 12:43:00 PM

A heart touching poem my lovely lovely friend read from you. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:08:00 AM

- Glad you liked this write, Bl :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/14/2015 1:38:00 PM

Terrific write Anne Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2015 1:28:00 PM

- Thanks, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/12/2015 6:48:00 AM

Your descriptive was conveyed in a very beautiful form....your write flows with extreme passion of love. A wonderful and an eloquent piece..............A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2015 12:34:00 PM

- Afolabi, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/12/2015 4:07:00 AM

Anne Lise, always beautiful in writing and so is your heart..! I hope you are doing alright.. I really am busy nowadays with some personal matters! I will make it up soon as I am done with it.. =`) thank you for the comments and virtual hugs! like it!~OliveEloisa Stay blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2015 12:34:00 PM

- Olive, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/12/2015 12:21:00 AM

Such a captivating poem, glad I had time this weekend to catch up on my reading!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2015 3:05:00 AM

- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/11/2015 1:50:00 PM

your angel glows with you, anne.. so beautiful for my sunday read!... bless you and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2015 3:04:00 AM

- Thanks Nette for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/11/2015 10:14:00 AM

A gem indeed Anne Lise, I love it, hope your Sunday is a brilliant one :) hugs W

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2015 3:04:00 AM

- Wilma, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/11/2015 9:57:00 AM

I read this wonderful poem yesterday and was sure I commented, now I see my comment was not posted, I do not know why! I loved it! Have a wonderful Sunday, your friend, Demetrios, a seven.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2015 1:55:00 PM

- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)