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The desert where Sage is trapped in.

Abandoned in the desert by robbers Bruised and bleeding Tied on hands and feet It was dark, cold and I was shaking The dawn of tomorrow will it rise? Please tell me A bad dream, close-up of red eyes Like a snake moving without limbs I followed a path, but suddenly it disappeared and I lost my sense of direction An ancient dry wind with sand that grinds skin Almost naked and sunburnt Be embraced with temptation So incredibly thirsty The lips are wounded and cracked Clean water drops would have been conditioner for a dry throat The moon is fading, the darkness of nights malignant A struggle to survive 27/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved * - It was no dream ... the victim was supposed to die ... but "I" ... or SHE survived ... this is from a true story

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/29/2019 1:13:00 AM

Oh, dear....what a horrific experience to have gone through. I'm glad she lived to tell the tale. I felt the desperation in every line, dear. Great write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2019 4:25:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 8:36:00 AM

A sad and horrific poetic tale my friend. There is so much evil in this world that it is hard to fathom. What possesses someone to do despicable things like this to another human being. I will never understand. Well expressed Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 9:08:00 AM

- I can't understand either, Chris ... it's just cruel and vicious - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2019 5:48:00 AM

A story well told, Anne-Lise..a miracle that anyone would survive such conditions..but miracles do happen as you eloquently depicted.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:54:00 AM

- A terrible experience, Vijay ... I'm sure it has left deep marks - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2019 3:19:00 AM

Such vivid imagery . I'm so glad they survived Anne-Lise , miracles do happen.Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/27/2019 11:11:00 PM

Thankfully the victim survived Anne, so much evil in our world. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:08:00 AM

- Violence against innocent people ... - Unacceptable, Tom - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/27/2019 10:30:00 PM

I'm glad you or she survived. This is a amazing poem. God bless you always, sweet lady, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/27/2019 8:08:00 PM

Glad the person survived this ordeal Anne...best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/27/2019 7:12:00 PM

wow...powerful poem...a nightmare to say the least,there is so much ugly in the world.... thankfully she survived....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 5:03:00 AM

- She survived ... dehydrated, a broken nose and low body temperature - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 10/27/2019 5:19:00 PM

My Gosh. I sure hope that wasn't you my friend. HOPE you OR she is okay today with no lasting scars emotionally or otherwise. A great write here and actually a great opener for a short story about a girl who went in search of her attackers and exacted her own brand of vigilante revenge. Praise God for His mercy. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 4:59:00 AM

- No, Judy it wasn't me - But there are robbers even in 2019 ... a terrible experience ... yes, a nightmare in the waking state - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2019 3:06:00 PM

Wow, one to be a dream , but to be real is frightening even worse and yes miracles do happen I've seen a few God has blessed me with. Hugs dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2019 4:51:00 AM

- She was found and it was a miracle, Eve :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/27/2019 2:10:00 PM

A fear of bad dream, I feel here. Beautifully pictured. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2019 2:19:00 PM

- No dream ... not a nightmare, my friend Bl - It's taken from a true story - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2019 1:40:00 PM

Sounds horrific...I don't think someone will last vRey long.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2019 1:49:00 PM

- Miracles can happen, my friend :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)