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- a Festive Day -

Your best day
                                         life is short
                                        live with joy

                                        The path you
                                         chose to go
                                        at first dawn

                                        Who has said
                                      your foot tracks
                                         is just dust ?





23.01.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Tricube Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

Tricube poem: 3 x 3 x 3 - 3 syllables per line - 3 stanzas

10th place in the contest

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Kathy Bahr

Date: 1/31/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thank you for coming by. Quite a pic you have there great poem.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/31/2023 7:28:00 AM

Love it, Anne-Lise! Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/31/2023 7:02:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise. Blessings my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 5:00:00 AM

Those red hat society ladies are enjoying themselves. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:27:00 PM

Thought-provoking question. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2023 7:41:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Alex :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/29/2023 3:45:00 PM

Anne-Lise, well done, love the last stanza, congratulations on your winning placement!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2023 7:41:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/29/2023 9:33:00 AM

Back with big congratulations on your win Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2023 7:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/26/2023 7:22:00 PM

We make the best of each day as when we get to this age we realize how short time is. Nicely one. love phyl

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2023 2:20:00 PM

Each day could be a bright one if we awake with the right attitude, Anne-Lise! I often used to meet an old friend of mine and ask "How are you today?" He'd answer: "I am out; I see the sky and the sun; I live another day" He was always happy. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2023 7:39:00 AM

- Always grateful, friend Paul :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 1/24/2023 8:46:00 AM

We should enjoy each day. Very nicely penned Anne, hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2023 8:57:00 AM

- very true, my friend :) - thank you for reading :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/24/2023 6:13:00 AM

I see them making the best of time left. Well done in this new form, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2023 6:43:00 AM

:))) ... yes they do ... why not :))) - Thanks, Vijay :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2023 2:46:00 AM

Beautiful new form poem. Best for a win. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2023 2:50:00 AM

- Fun to try something new ... thanks a lot, Victor :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/23/2023 10:11:00 PM

You are right, its all in the path you choose to go at first dawn. Dread the day, it may turn out dreadful. Plan a good day, you are off to a good start to make it a wonderful day. Thank you Anne -Lise. A wonderful message

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2023 7:38:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Wendy :) - hugs