---White Sugared Buns

white sugared buns parted buttered await the knife lick the wayward blade

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:40:00 PM

your haiku... are different from back then to know... enjoying...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 10:39:00 PM

oooh, love that licking part!! I always loved licking mom's batter spoons!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2011 3:48:00 PM

Go read the blog on senryu ;)

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 2:19:00 PM

Aha!? I'm seeing two pictures, dear Teach. Nevertheless, I feel like baking some bread, after this. And thanks for the enlightenment ealier today, Deb. Much appreciated. Love, Annalise

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 1:16:00 PM

Are you describing hot cross buns here Deb? If you are, then you have described them well.

Mike Bayles

Date: 2/21/2011 1:15:00 PM

This is a very nice poem. I can visualize it.