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---Serpentine River

serpentine river cleave the forest of pine-touch the sunset mount

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:26:00 PM

good monoku,,,pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in the "Nature Monoku" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/8/2011 4:56:00 AM

Lovely you've managed to capture the entire image, congrats on First Place!

Susan Mills

Date: 6/7/2011 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win! Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:10:00 PM

wow, I hadn't seen yours yet. It is splended, Deb, A very well deserved top placement! Congratulations.

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/5/2011 4:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement with this awsome ku. Chas

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/5/2011 12:24:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved first place win*huggs*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2011 5:44:00 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/4/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations with this beautiful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2011 7:22:00 AM

Ahh....the word cleave, just captures this whole poem....love it love it! (ps...if it not for your reminder, I would not be in the winner's circle....I had forgotten the monoku/haiku connection........so thank you for the kick in pants!! :) Congratulations on your beauty!

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/4/2011 1:30:00 AM

Great write Debbie, and a great win. Congrats to you. Best wishes Em :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/3/2011 11:36:00 PM

Awesome. Congratulations on your win, Debbie : )

Sidney Beck

Date: 6/3/2011 10:50:00 PM

beautiful words Deb,..... I tooo wanted to talk about the river and forest....this is one of the earth's most beautiful spots...i used to live nearby years ago....one could write for ever about it...congratulations and my best wishes as always...Syd

Rick Parise

Date: 6/3/2011 10:48:00 PM

Congrats on this fine write ~the wild river grasping the lush foliage, as the sun falls painting the hill top~ thats the imagery I got ~beautiful ~ of coarse I use 50 cent words and you use 75 cent words///Congrats^Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 8:24:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your first place win with this creative entry for Rick luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/2/2011 11:43:00 PM

I can definitely envision that "serpentine river" slithering up that "sunset mountain" -- beautiful take on the photo, Debbie :D

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 6:01:00 PM

a great monoku.... really a fan of you... is this a contest entry? if so... goodluck.... for sure you'll win.... ***jun-jun