---Red-Faced With Anger

red faced with anger eyeing a late leaving hussey gunfire

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/5/2011 2:29:00 PM

Good Senryu.Yes I am in FaceBook.There are so many Haiku groups in FB.Does your group has any special name Debbie?

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2011 2:34:00 PM

An all too well scene that has been captured in the movie's. Thanks kindly for your always lovely comments Debbie :)

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/4/2011 10:33:00 AM

Nice Senryu Debbie..Thanks for Sharing!!!!! Well done!!!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/3/2011 1:52:00 PM

hmmm...unlike Carries take, I saw a wild west scene with the man as the angry red faced person, mad at a woman. now i have to wonder, what was your thought as you wrote this???

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/3/2011 7:56:00 PM

Carrie was right a woman seeing another woman leaving her mans company...I was illustrating how you would SHOW jealousy as opposed to saying she was jealous of him

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/3/2011 11:09:00 AM

oooo~~~ doesn't sound as if this will end well !!! Nope...., it doesn't! Nothing worse than a woman scorned! ps...many thanks for the placement in your "ball' contest!!!! Loved reading each one!! :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/2/2011 10:34:00 PM

Is this for the contest "what angers you?" It should win. Linda just alerted me that I had won first place in your contest. I am so surprised and happy. That is a memory that haunts me, when I was too busy at times. Thank you very much. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2011 8:56:00 PM

Dangerous work...Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/2/2011 6:47:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your Senryu today Deb. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I am still having trouble commenting on poems and my back button is not working so hopefully soup can fix it us soon. I had to do a blog to congratulate all the winners as I would have to log in each time I did it. Can you imagine how long that would take. yippes. Thanks Deb. love phyl

Sharon Well

Date: 8/2/2011 4:02:00 PM

Nice work! Sharon.