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---Pillow Down Snow

pillow down snow weigh the frigid maple branch sap snap crack

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:48:00 PM

different and loving this one again... I will now try and fix my latest haiku, not the question ku... the ones I will post before the year is over~~maybe!!! xox~PD...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 5:45:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your placement Debbie, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/8/2011 8:05:00 PM

Lovely image Debbie. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2011 2:53:00 PM

Very original, Deb. That frigidness combined with the sap coming out sure would do the trick SNAP!! Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2011 2:30:00 PM

Sounds like my view from mine... congrats and thanks for supporting my contest...luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/8/2011 9:21:00 AM

Excellent, Deborah - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2011 9:06:00 AM

Very nice, Deb. Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 8:32:00 AM

Love this!!....another limb felled by the weight of snow. Brilliant! Congratulations, Debbie! Oh...and ps...and big thanks for the limerick placement in your recent contest!! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2011 7:13:00 AM

Enjoyed the last line..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2011 4:38:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in the Haiku from my window contest with this pleasant write so visual.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv.. much appreciation for my 4th place in your contest for "King Raider" bout my German Shepherd puppy ...

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on winning with this entry Debbie. I'm sick of pillow down snowfalls. I want to see the spring!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/1/2011 3:13:00 PM

Thats the view out my window!!! sorry it keeps you from making Money and working... That sounds like a good Idea in NY city, but wow stand up and read one of my poems.. Big time nerous with that one... you made me smile , thank you...luv Michael

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/31/2011 5:47:00 PM

enjoyed reading today.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2011 2:31:00 PM

Nice D.G., how are you.. poor branches.. well it might be a good thing the weight broke them... lol.. everyone can use a new limb... enjoyed,..p.d.