---Haiku

redolent breeze gusting through the lofty heights - shadowed tulips bow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 7:13:00 PM

RICK,, Congratulations with your AWESOME "UNZIPPED LIPS” entry in NANCY'S CRAZY contest. ~always :-) PD

David Williams

Date: 6/1/2012 1:39:00 PM

Rick congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2012 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "unzipped Lips" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/31/2012 6:27:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. Congratulations on oyur win.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/31/2012 6:20:00 PM

STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! Congratulations

Nancy Jones

Date: 5/31/2012 6:00:00 PM

Simply stunning. Thanks for the incredible write, Rick, namaste. ~N

Karen Deeks

Date: 5/31/2012 12:27:00 AM

Honestly one of the best haikus I have ever read, lovely description and i love the way you have only used one little tie up word... i never understand why people use so many ifs ands and such likes in such small spaces, looses so much of the descriptive possibilities... Lovely tyvm karen