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---Gray Squirrel

gray squirrel leaping across black asphalt--- tires squeal

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:22:00 PM

awee...hope he did not get hit... xox~pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Judy Ball

Date: 6/26/2011 5:51:00 PM

Those would probably be my tires because I can't stand to see the inocent little things hurt. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 6/26/2011 10:08:00 AM

Poor squirrel, LOL. Many congrats, Debs : )

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:01:00 AM

I knew this would be on the WINNERS LIST, Deb. Many congrats. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/26/2011 12:20:00 AM

Nice thoughts ,, very unique.Congrats Debbie on your win. love, gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:32:00 PM

Poor squirrel..Congrats..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:05:00 PM

Aack! I hope it stopped on time?? and that the squirrel was able to skitter off? Please say it did!! This sure is effective, Debbie, almost made me feel like I am the squirrel (oh but wait I am a monkey!!) Super congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 9:07:00 PM

this one was my favorite of all, Debs! I am liking all of them. So fun to read haiku!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:42:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your terrific win in the contest with this neat treat haiku luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 7:14:00 PM

ooooh, I LIKE this one. Kind of reminds me of my bird in the gutter haiku!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2011 11:07:00 AM

such great element of surprise, debs! enthralled by the ending! winning wishes if for a contest..;) huggs,nette