---Dead Chipmunk

dead chipmunk black cat’s doorstep gift--- exit shriek

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:21:00 PM

Debbie, another good haiku... my son loves this one... i had a cat who enjoyed pouring these dead chipmunks on my porch..yuk...lol..pd

Don Johnson

Date: 6/29/2011 5:43:00 PM

I had a grey cat that delivered a rabbit, Smoky went wild in the Aussie bush. like your flow in this one:) xo, Don

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 6/29/2011 8:33:00 AM

POOR chipmunk... :-) your haiku's are unbeatable...lol. Love, Randa

Judy Ball

Date: 6/26/2011 5:45:00 PM

haha Very well done my friend. Reminds me of the gifts of love my cat used to bring me. We must remember that when our cat does something like this it's a gift of love and we must not hurt her feelings about it. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 2:19:00 PM

Yes, of course, my Lady is summer, and I was showing the three months of "her." WEll, when I go and do deep search, it asks for exact form and category and I cannot possibly remember all my poems and how I categorized them. I just don't see how you are using that search engine, Deb!!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/26/2011 8:52:00 AM

Very nice..enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 8:45:00 AM

really cute. More themes on dead animals. I like it. soupmail.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 3:57:00 PM

I KNEW I should have asked u first about that darn word but looked it up online dictionary and this is what it showed but did not look or feel right to me.. same thing with seguey but Nette set me straight on that one.. I used to get 100's in spelling long time ago.. oh.. time marched on.. thankxx Debbie..

Jack Horne

Date: 6/24/2011 2:02:00 PM

LOL, I can imagine... we often hear our neighbour scream when her terrier drops a dead rat on her foot!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/24/2011 10:40:00 AM

sad. poor little chipmunk..but Ill admit it made me laugh... BG