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The Jagged Edges

J with Four Options Poetry Contest: Free verse 
sponsor :Constance La France 
Date:7/31/25

“Not all pain howls, some sharpens”
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I never asked to come out clean
life carved me raw on purpose 
some parts were shaped in silence
the rest I had to burn
not all soft things were meant to last    
I watched them melt then vanish
while I turned thorn to anthem
and dressed my hurt in steel
you think I cracked but I evolved
I had to break open just to breathe
if I could trace the shape of my breaking
I might learn what it means to remain
still I stand here not whole but aware
jagged edges still holding what I could
I walk with wounds that never fade  
but shine beneath the skin
my scars all lines of poetry
the world was too quiet to hear
there’s beauty in the splintered
when you stop calling it a flaw





Copyright © Brenda Chiri | Year Posted 2025

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Date: 8/2/2025 9:16:00 PM

Remarkable, razor-sharp rebuke to any and all conventional notions -- from one tough customer. ~ gw
Date: 8/2/2025 5:52:00 PM

Beautiful! Perfect for this contest and could also double for mine... beauty in the eye of the beholder! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 7:05:00 AM

Brenda, this is breathtaking. Every line feels like it was carved from truth and lit by fire. There's such strength in the way you’ve embraced the breaking and turned it into something luminous. “My scars all lines of poetry / the world was too quiet to hear” — that gave me chills. Your voice reminds us that survival is its own kind of art, and that there’s fierce beauty in what the world once called flawed...Hugs
Date: 7/31/2025 9:03:00 AM

I have to say Brenda your writing is even better than before, hope this does well in the contest. Fyi brake-break?
Date: 7/31/2025 7:20:00 AM

Real gritty stuff, Brenda Lee! Love the ending: "there’s beauty in the splintered when you stop calling it flaw". Really good write - enjoyed lots! :) john
Date: 7/31/2025 5:31:00 AM

Remarkable free verse with a survival theme. You might like Crystol 's piece - Sisterhood of Scars

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