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a young man bought a tight pair of fleeces
          and their stranglehold filled all the creases
               but the fit was so thin
     that he couldn't begin
to pump blood to his bits ... and his pieces

well, they made him look chic as expected
          though his girlfriend was feeling neglected
               cuz from belly through bum
     his poor junk was so numb
that he couldn’t QUITE get it ... erected.








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Date: 8/16/2024 9:38:00 AM
I like this limerick. Great analogy, picture.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/17/2024 12:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate it! <3

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