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a young man bought a tight pair of fleeces and their stranglehold filled all the creases but the fit was so thin that he couldn't begin to pump blood to his bits ... and his pieces well, they made him look chic as expected though his girlfriend was feeling neglected cuz from belly through bum his poor junk was so numb that he couldn’t QUITE get it ... erected. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden

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Date: 8/16/2024 9:38:00 AM
I like this limerick. Great analogy, picture.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/17/2024 12:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate it! <3

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