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"what we see"

I wonder how you see me
how I look in your eyes
are expectations met
what do you see

you wonder how I see you
how you look in my eyes
are expectations met
what do I see

we see each other
we look with open eyes
with expectations met
love is what we see

SkyWatcher
04-22-24



"stare once more"

nothing touches me more when you stare at me
what I see I wish those moments to never end
moonlight or sunrise kisses could not be finer
for the passion continues to grow stronger

holding hands with words of love reach my heart
such reflections of tenderness are our light
all this and more ignite dawn and darkness
love found its way to cherish forevermore

each glance from you I desire and hold
touch my world and stare once more

SkyWatcher
written 04-25-18



"with much to say"

since that one fine day
with everything to taste
I see you
I hear you
you touch me
I feel evermore

since that one fine day
with everything real
you see me
you hear me
I touch you
you feel equally

since that one fine day
with love we bring
we both have much to say

SkyWatcher
04-27-24

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Date: 7/27/2024 9:59:00 PM
Lisa my honest loving kind friend whenI think of your face it is with trust and kindness and your soul dear friend is made of gold ,- I would love to meet you, spend time with you have a cup of tea as you give me your opinion of my published book Tea Break Poems . Your love radiates across the pond and reaches South African Shores with unbelievable kindness. Hugs and blessings Jennnifer
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:32:00 PM
Well well, you're quite the romantic aren't you? "Some people want to fill the world with silly love songs (poems). What wrong with that?" From a Paul McCartney song
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:57:00 AM
Hello Tom. You have me smiling with your commentary. Truly. Thank you. I know of that song and its a great song. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. (smile)
Date: 5/2/2024 1:14:00 PM
Very beautiful Lisa! So glad to see you back….Debx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Deb. Hi. I come and go unfortunately. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. (smile)
Date: 5/2/2024 6:17:00 AM
Dear Lisa, your three entries are beautiful reflections on the depth of connection and love between two individuals. Each poem beautifully captures moments of intimacy and vulnerability, evoking a sense of warmth and tenderness. I loved how your words are filled with authenticity and emotions of love's profound impact on our lives. These are heartfelt pieces. - Blessings, Daniel
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:55:00 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I do not take your generosity for granted. Truly. I appreciate your wonderful intake and commentary. Your review means much. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. Blessings back to you. Thank you for that. (smile)

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