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Visual Art
I saw you in a dream
You were so nice 
Could remember the face
I tried to make it come alive
Through some art 
To recall how lovely it was
But feel it could be better
I’m not that confident
I still feel it could be better
Will try again when my technique gets better.  

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Date: 6/27/2025 3:54:00 PM
Looks good! Must have been an interesting dream.
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Date: 12/17/2024 8:03:00 AM
Looks like a mug shot lol. Maybe if you have him a smile? Hey, nice to see you again
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