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Visual Art

Visual Art
I saw you in a dream
You were so nice 
Could remember the face
I tried to make it come alive
Through some art 
To recall how lovely it was
But feel it could be better
I’m not that confident
I still feel it could be better
Will try again when my technique gets better.
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Looks good! Must have been an interesting dream.
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