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Truth II

                      Oh, soundless stars like  
                               a solid-looking, fragrant brook.
                                        I'm standing there,
                                     before the sunset, and
                                     covering the golden chains
                                      of the stars  
                                       with beaming kisses,
                                l    like a fated  chrysanthemum;
                                      enshrining  an untamed
                                     piercing forest.

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Tom Woody

Date: 1/19/2025 9:45:00 AM

Beautiful scene you've created Mu. Love the contrast of an old, perhaps semi dilapidated house with the beauty of the cosmos and us somewhere in between

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 1/19/2025 10:50:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. Have a nice week , Mulu.