THREADS OF WHIMSEY

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THREADS OF WHIMSEY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ threads of whimsy doth weave the fabric of today while time twists the yarns of yesterday

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/1/2025 7:38:00 PM

lovely ~ particularly love how 'twists the yarns of yesterday' can be interpreted as rewriting/twisting truths. And the alliteration is the cherry on top making your finale extra special.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 9:48:00 PM

A rat with a dress shop? That's a reach. But a cute poem. Love Ya, Bill

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/26/2025 11:46:00 AM

Sara, you're giving us something to think about regarding our relationship with the past. I guess as you say whimsy doesn't affect the past...it is what it is.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 4:47:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Duke. I'm grateful you found my whimsical poem a bit thought provoking. Made my day! have a great weekend, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2025 3:10:00 AM

It is amazing in history how some of it gets twisted as the years past like some things changed, but they didn't change only were twisted truth. Creative work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 4:48:00 PM

Insightful and truthful words, Sara K. Appreciate your visit and kind words, Sara B