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THREADS OF WHIMSEY

THREADS OF WHIMSEY
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threads of whimsy doth
weave
the fabric of today
while
time twists the yarns of
yesterday

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Line Gauthier

August 1, 2025 at 7:38 PM

lovely ~ particularly love how 'twists the yarns of yesterday' can be interpreted as rewriting/twisting truths. And the alliteration is the cherry on top making your finale extra special.

Bill Baker

July 28, 2025 at 9:48 PM

A rat with a dress shop? That's a reach. But a cute poem. Love Ya, Bill

Duke Beaufort

July 26, 2025 at 11:46 AM

Sara, you're giving us something to think about regarding our relationship with the past. I guess as you say whimsy doesn't affect the past...it is what it is.

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 4:47 PM

thanks for visiting, Duke. I'm grateful you found my whimsical poem a bit thought provoking. Made my day! have a great weekend, Sara

Sara Kendrick

July 26, 2025 at 3:10 AM

It is amazing in history how some of it gets twisted as the years past like some things changed, but they didn't change only were twisted truth. Creative work. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 4:48 PM

Insightful and truthful words, Sara K. Appreciate your visit and kind words, Sara B

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