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the snows melt

first day of spring
sunny and mild

as the snow-smelt
of hidden greens

below a blue sky
this weekend


len

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/30/2025 11:00:00 AM
I love this!! Reminds me of my hometown, except without the snow, haha. Keep writing :3
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Date: 4/2/2025 8:26:00 AM
thank you......you keep goin too......len
Date: 3/28/2025 5:11:00 PM
I enjoyed the fresh and lovely spring images evoked by this poem, Len. Well done!
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Date: 3/29/2025 2:34:00 PM
thanks......the snow (s)melts fresh and clean.......len
Date: 3/21/2025 2:33:00 PM
nice - sounds like here - except for the snow!
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Sand Blown
Date: 3/27/2025 4:35:00 PM
actually, the snow's not that bad......it's clean frozen water .....len
Date: 3/20/2025 6:47:00 PM
Wonderful read. Spring is on its way!!
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Sand Blown
Date: 3/21/2025 5:11:00 AM
thanks much for the comment.....the snow here is going fast......len
Date: 3/20/2025 5:09:00 PM
A beautiful, delightful read ... CayCay
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Sand Blown
Date: 3/21/2025 5:13:00 AM
some plants are already going green.......len

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