the snows melt

first day of spring sunny and mild as the snow-smelt of hidden greens below a blue sky this weekend len

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Reya Suri

Date: 3/30/2025 11:00:00 AM

I love this!! Reminds me of my hometown, except without the snow, haha. Keep writing :3

Sand Blown
Date: 4/2/2025 8:26:00 AM

thank you......you keep goin too......len

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/28/2025 5:11:00 PM

I enjoyed the fresh and lovely spring images evoked by this poem, Len. Well done!

Sand Blown
Date: 3/29/2025 2:34:00 PM

thanks......the snow (s)melts fresh and clean.......len

David Crandall

Date: 3/21/2025 2:33:00 PM

nice - sounds like here - except for the snow!

Sand Blown
Date: 3/27/2025 4:35:00 PM

actually, the snow's not that bad......it's clean frozen water .....len

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/20/2025 6:47:00 PM

Wonderful read. Spring is on its way!!

Sand Blown
Date: 3/21/2025 5:11:00 AM

thanks much for the comment.....the snow here is going fast......len

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/20/2025 5:09:00 PM

A beautiful, delightful read ... CayCay

Sand Blown
Date: 3/21/2025 5:13:00 AM

some plants are already going green.......len