the snows melt

first day of spring
sunny and mild

as the snow-smelt
of hidden greens

below a blue sky
this weekend


len
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Suri Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 11:00 AM
I love this!! Reminds me of my hometown, except without the snow, haha. Keep writing :3
Blown Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 8:26 AM
thank you......you keep goin too......len
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 5:11 PM
I enjoyed the fresh and lovely spring images evoked by this poem, Len. Well done!
Blown Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 2:34 PM
thanks......the snow (s)melts fresh and clean.......len
Crandall Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 2:33 PM
nice - sounds like here - except for the snow!
Blown Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:35 PM
actually, the snow's not that bad......it's clean frozen water .....len
Mckeithan Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Wonderful read. Spring is on its way!!
Blown Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:11 AM
thanks much for the comment.....the snow here is going fast......len
Godwin Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 5:09 PM
A beautiful, delightful read ... CayCay
Blown Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:13 AM
some plants are already going green.......len
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