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The Brook Writes Its Blue Dream

   Its fragrance,its aroma may 
              be felt  by the windy,
                     naked rose.
                Sometimes it flows so sweetly,
                     so brightly, to  dominate
                         its darkness.

                  Its enduring, aroma
                  is the fragile, brittle mirror
                    of an abyss.
                  Its shadow is frequently    
                  the craggy
                       saw-toothed  lily.
                      Marky or not,the brook
                      usually crosses the devastating
                         cliffs,sipping the invincible 
                            sky.
                   If we infuse it with  dusty
                    grassy tears ,it'll be 
                   a formidable task.
                   The searing joy sounds
                     an unflinching,iron bird.
                   Its scarlet transformation sparkles
                       with a torrential,stony
                         sunrise.
                    Every stride echoes in 
                        the chambers of the
                          flowery star.
                     Every smile,every glimpse
                         holds a hiden truth.
                                                            

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Date: 2/27/2024 2:42:00 PM
Hello Mulu, This poem made me feel llike i was near a brook. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hello Mulu,Y ou are welcome my dear friend. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/27/2024 3:05:00 PM
Hello Darlene,thank you,my dear friend. Have a blessed afternoon.
Date: 2/20/2024 4:03:00 PM
I will later soupmail you. I am on my phone right now and am bad with copy and paste
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Date: 2/11/2024 8:57:00 AM
An awesome ending on this one. I loved the image of sipping the invincible sky. So poetic
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/11/2024 9:45:00 AM
Hello Andrea,thank you.Have a wonderful day.
Date: 2/4/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hello Mulu, Wow! This is a great poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2024 10:42:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/5/2024 2:44:00 AM
Hello Darlene,thank you. Have a blessed week!
Date: 2/3/2024 11:09:00 AM
absolutely excellent poetry..
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/3/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/2/2024 11:58:00 PM
Wow this is beautiful
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/3/2024 12:11:00 PM
Thank you!

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