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16.00 pm July 15, 2025

Celebrating the grace and beauty of swans | The Caravan Club

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Len Gasun

Date: 8/2/2025 10:03:00 PM

Shaped Haiku 2 Contest Judged: 7/16/2025 5:54:00 AM Sponsored by: JCB Brul Place 1 (up to 2 and HM multi-w)

Lyric Man

Date: 7/27/2025 1:15:00 PM

When I grow up I’d like to be able to do what you’ve done here.. brilliant, clever, and beautiful. And, I bet if you look carefully on that glassy lake you will see a reflection that is likewise brilliant, clever, and beautiful… and that reflection would be… you!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2025 5:14:00 PM

OH MY GOSH. The moment I scrolled down and the poem came into view I was blown away. NO WAY that was easy to achieve so please know the result is awesome. I'm straight tripping. I look at a keyboard and see what I have for 35 years as an Executive Assistant, NOT ART, and nothing comes to me. Uh oh, the words, we write words, right? The words are pretty and fitting. Oh my ... CayCay (noticed you won, and you should have no matter which contest it was - Congrats)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2025 1:37:00 PM

WOW!!! Your "swans" is a great write and amazing shape. Love the pretty picture... How much time did this take you to do??? "Good Luck" if for a contest. I have been off the computer for a few days and now way behind. Hope you are OK. Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away............

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 11:32:00 PM

Dear poet friend Paula, sorry for the late reply. Thanks for reading &your encouraging words. I'm glad you love the picture dear. For the illustration, it took about 40-50 min. i think, along w/ the haiku and running back carrying my laptop to my room/home from school to reconnect to the wife before clicking enter. I'm now ok too. Thank you dear. Sorry for the late reply. I'm now on my way to your page... Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2025 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Exceptionals work. I like the way the two swans make a heart shape when they come together. Nature's beauty. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 11:04:00 PM

Belated thank you dear poet friend Sara. Thanks a lot for sharing yours too. Hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/16/2025 9:16:00 PM

OHH! beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 10:51:00 PM

Thanks for reading and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend thriveni! Blessings to you always! Hugs

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/16/2025 10:03:00 AM

No way!!!! I'm shook. Okay, now THIS is my fav image lol...I cannot believe the level of artistic talent here! Xo

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 10:33:00 PM

Oh...I'm a shy person and a great honor if you fave this image dear. In fact patience sometimes takes its worth. lol. Thanks a lot belatedly for reading and enjoying it. Blessings to you always.

Trina Layne

Date: 7/16/2025 7:08:00 AM

Len, your shapes are always so amazing. Beautiful!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 10:20:00 PM

Thanks belatedly for your very encouraging and uplifting comment and for taking time to read my shape haiku dear poet friend Trina.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2025 4:43:00 AM

Very nice!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 10:14:00 PM

Thanks belatedly my dear poet friend Kim!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/15/2025 5:52:00 PM

Excellent poetry and art, Len. A very well-written shape / Haiku poem. I enjoy your visit today, come again, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 8/2/2025 10:04:00 PM

Belated thank you my dear poet friend Bill for your encouraging comment. I just love drawing :) I'm glad you enjoyed my visit and I'll come back if you don't mind. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/15/2025 10:11:00 AM

Dear Len, I am always impressed to see such effort taken to create and write this imagery. Wonderful! Summer Blessings, My Dear Len, Daniel

Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2025 9:14:00 PM

Nice to see you back my dear poet friend Daniel. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 7/15/2025 5:25:00 AM

If this isn't a winner I don't know what is. Excellent shape poetry Len

Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2025 8:48:00 PM

Sorry for late reply dear poet friend, Tom. Thanks for reading my poem and your encouraging comment. You're a poet angel who gave me luck. God bless you always and happy weekend! Hugs

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2025 10:04:00 AM

Right?! Just wow!