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Surreal Poem

Last night I dreamed
your eyes were lit
in a world of fire
your kisses struck
like heat lightning
many moons rose and fell
tides pulled the shoreline closer
you transparent as a ghost
and in the heat of this frozen night
we were still there...

You the porcelain doll
eyes that open and shut
words yet to crack
mute rain between us
eyelashes black and shiny
sitting on the edge of the mountain
with just a shallow stare...

My body gliding to you
I try and break through
waves that have become mountains
that cover the pale skyline...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/17/2014 4:07:00 AM
beautifully penned ken dear pal
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:20:00 PM
Very descriptive and passionate work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/13/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Sara..It's always a pleasure to visit your page!
Date: 12/13/2014 2:45:00 AM
How fantastic and ethereal the feel of this poem is. I live in dreams too. Lovely
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/13/2014 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Eileen!

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