Sun

The sun tiptoed in through the window
and kissed her upon the cheek
a morning ritual 
the two had set on repeat
she closed her eyes
as if not to notice
but daylight took her hand
announcing it was time 
to rise up and take a stand

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/13/2023 2:45:00 PM

Reality is what you make it. Go with the flow. I'd recommend she put on her Sun Factor 30+ to avoid being burnt to a crisp. Reality is what you wish, Reality is what you make it to be. If you wish Love and Light, and all things good, a person will strive to make it so - if that is what they want. Some dreams are achievable, if you want them that badly, you will make reality happen and then sustain it. My humble addled opinion, of course.

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/13/2023 6:02:00 PM

45 if you're going to the beach :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/13/2023 10:36:00 AM

Hello Tim. Hoping you are well. Unfortunately reality is not always romantic.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/13/2023 9:47:00 AM

A bit of a different approach with this one, Tim... unless you are the sun that kisses her cheek.