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The sun tiptoed in through the window and kissed her upon the cheek a morning ritual the two had set on repeat she closed her eyes as if not to notice but daylight took her hand announcing it was time to rise up and take a stand

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Date: 11/13/2023 2:45:00 PM
Reality is what you make it. Go with the flow. I'd recommend she put on her Sun Factor 30+ to avoid being burnt to a crisp. Reality is what you wish, Reality is what you make it to be. If you wish Love and Light, and all things good, a person will strive to make it so - if that is what they want. Some dreams are achievable, if you want them that badly, you will make reality happen and then sustain it. My humble addled opinion, of course.
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Date: 11/13/2023 6:02:00 PM
45 if you're going to the beach :)
Date: 11/13/2023 10:36:00 AM
Hello Tim. Hoping you are well. Unfortunately reality is not always romantic.
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Date: 11/13/2023 9:47:00 AM
A bit of a different approach with this one, Tim... unless you are the sun that kisses her cheek.
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