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ROOM FOR RENT

Too small, for two of us. Wanting to run away, I was reluctant to stay here. Our pay checks did not reach far in those days, I had a place to rest my head. Needed more rent money, please rain dollars. Too small.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/3/2025 5:21:00 PM

nicely constructed Rictameter, Paula. best wishes in the contest, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2025 1:53:00 PM

I can remember our first home (if you could call it that). It was all one room plus a bathroom. LOL..I can feel the emotion in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/3/2025 1:29:00 PM

sometimes, we need space, except space needs money, I totally feel this poem Paula

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2025 12:28:00 PM

ROOM FOR RENT ~ Date Written:8/3/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~~ #3, ROLLING WITH THE Rs Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~~~~