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That evening, so romantic
along with you by the seashore
as I sat watching the dreamy sunset...

when the sky blushed in pink, 
relishing his kiss -
the sun's parting kiss for the day:
so sweet, but quick.. 
her cheeks were glowing:
the sky - a blend of red and orange
and almost flushing red now
as her beloved orb golden
takes leave for his short silent stroll
into the lonely dusk
to leave her be lost in a reverie
for the rest of the night
with a promise to be back
to illuminate her somber soul
with his effulgent gaze
the next dawn

I remember those enchanting eyes...

that spoke a lot... 

when a soft sea breeze gently whispered 
tales of love into our ears...
on that glorious evening... 

I still remember... 

those eloquent eyes of yours...

yearning to be merged with those of mine

your voice was muted

you were silent as always

but... those fetching pair of eyes...

they expressed more
than your voice would ever have

In a distant land now... 
engrossed in duties
to trudge through the daily grind
do you still remember that beauteous evening
as we sat beside each other
losing ourselves
in the mesmeric charm of the sunset
feeling the throb of silence

when my eyes happened to
read between the lines
of an incomplete romantic tale
of the memoirs of your soul's diary...

as they met...

your entrancing eloquent gaze...


Date: 10/06/2021
"R" Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/12/2021 1:09:00 PM
A slow dance with a beautiful memory. Very thought-provoking lines.
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Date: 10/10/2021 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Anitha, who could resist such a warm, and wonderful poetry.
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Date: 10/9/2021 6:18:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing. So beautiful from top to bottom. Great description of sunset.
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Date: 10/8/2021 12:24:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your win with this great verse.
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Date: 10/8/2021 10:26:00 AM
This is such a well deserved win. I am seeing from below here that you got a top win, so BIG congrats. You were very clever in how you presented this poem with the two different fonts. Very romontic, dear. Congrats.
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Date: 10/7/2021 11:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Ani... So lovely imagery throughout... Enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 10/7/2021 3:30:00 PM
Wow! Anitha, You composed a lovely poem using the word " romantic". I found it to be enchanting and very romantic. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:15:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic Ani. many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win - I knew you would! A lovely romantic poem with mesmerizing images. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Mala... for the return visit and the congrats... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 9:30:00 AM
This is a free verse with every minute detail ending with meaningful glances. Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula... You too have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 7:45:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:31:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much for such an inspiring contest...enjoyed writing as always...Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 10:56:00 AM
Ohhhh...so romantic, Anitha. This poem takes me to a dreamy sunset on a beach. "your entrancing eloquent gaze..." Love your word-choice! BW ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:26:00 AM
Mala... Thank you so much dear... am happy you loved my word choice... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 7:43:00 AM
What a romantic poem. 'm sure it will rate high. Best for a win.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 6:43:00 AM
You rose well to the challenge Ani with this very romantic verse. Best of luck in the contest and hope your week is going well. Tom
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/6/2021 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom... just a fiction for the contest... yes, going good.. I hope your week is going well too... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

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