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PRIOR TO INTENT: Dawn's First Light

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DAWN'S FIRST LIGHT ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ silence at daybreak. sacred encounter with the Divine, a conference of heart and soul. beyond form, beyond language heart beats, an echo, a pulse vibrating through the silence. wordless intent, unvoiced yet profoundly clear~ a stirring, a flicker of grace captures the dawn. my soul meets God's pulse I am led I am unbound. soul ascends Poem written for Prior to Intent Poetry Content, Unseeking Seeker, sponsor, July 30, 2025

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/1/2025 6:08:00 AM

An exquisite odyssey of life through kaleidoscope soul awareness and wonderful metaphorical scales. Congratulations on your podium win.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:44:00 PM

thanks, dear Sotto, for your insightul and congratulatory words...grateful and excited about the podium win, sending you wishes for a pleasant weekend, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2025 1:29:00 AM

Yes, daybreak can bring those feelings at that time of day. Thanks for sharing this one with us. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:43:00 PM

thanks for dropping by, Sara K. I appreciate your consistent visits and kind words. Fingers crossed on placing in the contest. hugs and blessings, Sara

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/31/2025 11:11:00 PM

The attainment of 'Moksha'.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:42:00 PM

thank you for your words. They mean a lot. I'm a little familiar with Moksha and Samsara. I appreciate you and your visit. enjoy your evening, sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/31/2025 2:06:00 AM

Sara, I again must tell you, so glad you are back, I found such sweetness and peace in these beautiful words you have written.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 2:51:00 AM

I'm grateful for your kind words, BJ. I'm glad to be back; knowing my words provided you with peace makes the return even sweeter. Thanks for your ongoing support. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/31/2025 1:53:00 AM

Incredible contrast between the prosaic, lovely words put into poetry. Not to mention, this one has absolutely breathtaking imagery. The feeling of His presence has been beautifully conveyed.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 2:52:00 AM

thank you, kind Sotto, for your words--words that uplifted and encouraged me this morning! Color me grateful. Have a splendid Thursday, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 1:26:00 AM

Great poem and very spiritual. Best for a win.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 2:53:00 AM

I appreciate your visit and your kind words, Victor. Wishing you a blessed day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2025 6:08:00 PM

Beautiful, truly!!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 2:53:00 AM

thank you, Paige! Grateful for your visit and complimentary words. Have a splendid day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2025 4:59:00 PM

Nice spiritual write, dear Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/30/2025 5:35:00 PM

awww, thank you, sweet Kim...enjoy your evening, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 4:58:00 PM

I like the imagery in this one, Sara. You've captured the moment of His presence well. Good luck in the contest, my love. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/30/2025 5:34:00 PM

awww, thank you hubby for your complimentary and encouraging words, love , me :-)