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Patels a Loving Family

A Family that will always save you bloat 
Is none other than Patel’s says my throat.
Boasting? No, really. They are like a tote
Fill whatever from them, they won’t denote.
What a family, what a love, what an antidote.
Whenever you go to them, they are remote
To say “No” – a habit which they wrote
For them – gentle, docile and elegant coat.
All children – Deep, Arti, Nand, Dhir are raincoat.
With their parents and cousins ride a boat
Of success; all creative and ready to devote.
I never forget this family. This a way I emote.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/26/2017 5:51:00 AM
Really I enjoyed this beautiful piece. Well-penned, Sankey.
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Sanket Jain
Date: 10/14/2017 3:06:00 AM
Thanks for your inspiring, kind, soft fingers. Very few appreciated my poems. You are one among them. Obliged.

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