Patels a Loving Family

A Family that will always save you bloat 
Is none other than Patel’s says my throat.
Boasting? No, really. They are like a tote
Fill whatever from them, they won’t denote.
What a family, what a love, what an antidote.
Whenever you go to them, they are remote
To say “No” – a habit which they wrote
For them – gentle, docile and elegant coat.
All children – Deep, Arti, Nand, Dhir are raincoat.
With their parents and cousins ride a boat
Of success; all creative and ready to devote.
I never forget this family. This a way I emote.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 5:51 AM
Really I enjoyed this beautiful piece. Well-penned, Sankey.
Jain Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 3:06 AM
Thanks for your inspiring, kind, soft fingers. Very few appreciated my poems. You are one among them. Obliged.
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