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Outpouring of Entertainment

timely and still late long line stalled in parking lot cooler in car trunk, can’t reach finally pouring past lips and seeping through pores propped up, shoulder to shoulder

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/3/2025 10:34:00 AM

Great that you had fun at this event/venue and that you saw Rod Stewart and I'm sure other big names. 'Propped up shoulder to shoulder' must have been crowded.I'm glad for you. Blessings and hugs. Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, dear Jenn!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/2/2025 10:18:00 PM

The event sounds super exciting dear poet friend. Hope you've great fun. Blessings to you for sharing this lovely and delightful sedoka, dear. I love it and enjoyed. Sorry for late visit. Have a great wkend/new week ahead! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Len!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/2/2025 4:47:00 PM

sounds like the venue was crowded. Hope you enjoyed the event, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2025 5:44:00 PM

I did! We saw Rod Stewart and his likewise talented performers! Best show!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/2/2025 3:14:00 PM

It seems like you're trying to get somewhere. Very cool write, Kim <3 hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2025 4:05:00 PM

Actually we were at an amphitheater! :) Hugs