Outpouring of Entertainment

timely and still late
long line stalled in parking lot
cooler in car trunk, can’t reach

finally pouring
past lips and seeping through pores
propped up, shoulder to shoulder

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Date: 8/4/2025 1:42:00 AM
I am reading comments below . Wow you got to see Rid Stewart. When was this? Your title is so cool here
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2025 1:44:00 PM
Thank you! I my goodness…if you get the chance, go see him! I never would have known. He is quite the showman and surrounds himself with ultra talent!
Date: 8/3/2025 10:34:00 AM
Great that you had fun at this event/venue and that you saw Rod Stewart and I'm sure other big names. 'Propped up shoulder to shoulder' must have been crowded.I'm glad for you. Blessings and hugs. Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, dear Jenn!
Date: 8/2/2025 10:18:00 PM
The event sounds super exciting dear poet friend. Hope you've great fun. Blessings to you for sharing this lovely and delightful sedoka, dear. I love it and enjoyed. Sorry for late visit. Have a great wkend/new week ahead! Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Len!
Date: 8/2/2025 4:47:00 PM
sounds like the venue was crowded. Hope you enjoyed the event, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2025 5:44:00 PM
I did! We saw Rod Stewart and his likewise talented performers! Best show!
Date: 8/2/2025 3:14:00 PM
It seems like you're trying to get somewhere. Very cool write, Kim <3 hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2025 4:05:00 PM
Actually we were at an amphitheater! :) Hugs
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