Outpouring of Entertainment

timely and still late
long line stalled in parking lot
cooler in car trunk, can’t reach

finally pouring
past lips and seeping through pores
propped up, shoulder to shoulder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 1:42 AM
I am reading comments below . Wow you got to see Rid Stewart. When was this? Your title is so cool here
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Thank you! I my goodness…if you get the chance, go see him! I never would have known. He is quite the showman and surrounds himself with ultra talent!
Proxenos Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Great that you had fun at this event/venue and that you saw Rod Stewart and I'm sure other big names. 'Propped up shoulder to shoulder' must have been crowded.I'm glad for you. Blessings and hugs. Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, dear Jenn!
Gasun Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 10:18 PM
The event sounds super exciting dear poet friend. Hope you've great fun. Blessings to you for sharing this lovely and delightful sedoka, dear. I love it and enjoyed. Sorry for late visit. Have a great wkend/new week ahead! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much, Len!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:47 PM
sounds like the venue was crowded. Hope you enjoyed the event, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 5:44 PM
I did! We saw Rod Stewart and his likewise talented performers! Best show!
Hind Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:14 PM
It seems like you're trying to get somewhere. Very cool write, Kim <3 hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Actually we were at an amphitheater! :) Hugs
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