NIGHT FELL

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NIGHT FELL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As night falls, the blue curtain of day is pulled back. I am able to see out of the window called ‘the sky’ to the universe, the cosmos beyond my tiny part of the world. I stand beneath the night sky somehow feeling closer to the truth of who I really am. whispers on the wind echoes through the silent night truth’s gentle voice speaks

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2025 2:28:00 AM

Deep and revealing. I can feel the emotion in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/2/2025 2:50:00 AM

thank you, Sara K, for your mindful comments. Appreciate you and your visits, hugs, Sara B

Bill Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 6:18:00 PM

A FAV for the poems in my heart, Sara. A beautifully written Haibun, my love. It touched my soul, and my soul smiled at me. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/2/2025 2:50:00 AM

awww! Glad this poem touched your heart and soul. Grateful for you and your visits! hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/1/2025 6:00:00 PM

Very nice! A favorite :-)