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Moondance

I was alone in my room,
Heard someone tap on my 
window,
Hey Jack quickly let's go my 
friend said,
I must be daft because I  left 
with her. 

Holding hands  we arrived at 
the beach,
Waves catching our feet as we 
reach,
A cloud was blocking our 
sight, 
And when it passed,we  were 
awed.

The pull by the moon was 
magnetic,
It's cool aura washing down 
my face.
I smile like i never done  
before,
Without my sight I could feel 
it's beautiful.

We both splash into the 
waters,
A faint voice coming from 
behind us ,
A tug and hug from her and 
then she was gone, 
Just as my mum rush to my 
side and hugged.

Honey why did You come here 
all by yourself?
You could have been swept 
away by the tide.
Did she not see that I was 
not alone? 
A thousand questions played 
my mind as we walk back 
home .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/17/2013 7:47:00 AM
- Congratulations....it deserved to be higher up on the winning list, Danesh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/18/2013 7:04:00 AM
thank u so much tat means a lot to me
Date: 11/17/2013 3:13:00 AM
Danesh, Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:44:00 AM
- Wooow ... very skillfully written Danesh! - Impressive!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/4/2013 7:06:00 AM
it Wat an inspiration thank you
Date: 11/4/2013 4:31:00 AM
What an intriguing poem, Danesh..very well written. You have me wondering as well! :) Thank you for posting this enchanting piece. Hugs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/4/2013 7:08:00 AM
thank you so much Eileen it means so much to me

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