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My heart is lost in depth of woes, While sorrows echo loud. As tears descend with silent throes~ Beneath a veil of cloud. In the dark I grope for my lost heart, But it's slipped beyond my firm grip. Each tear I shed softens its grave, And deeper it sinks, out of reach. My anguish drums a hollow grief, No hope of joy or smile. My mind is caged in disbelief— It may remain awhile. I need no soothsayer to tell me— I’m already buried in its depth. My cries are aches without relief, And I can’t restrain the tears. It's far beyond all hope or aid, I know—so others do. Though cries may rise and voices fade, None brings the lost I rue.

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Date: 8/3/2025 6:23:00 AM
Nice work. I Enjoy it
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 8/3/2025 7:29:00 AM
Nice to know Joyce. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 7/31/2025 8:21:00 AM
Dear Maclawrence, congratulations for your success in Craig's contest with your amazing poem. Your woeful emotion is poignant and palpable and expressed in a beautifully distressed way. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/31/2025 11:17:00 AM
Susan, I appreciate you taking time to read my poem and your wonderful words of encouragement.
Date: 7/3/2025 10:10:00 AM
Well-done, Maclawrence. I like the alternating stanzas of rhyme and free verse. Your iambic is near perfect. For suggestions, check your soup mail. Your focus is clear and concise. Best of luck in the contest.
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/3/2025 9:40:00 PM
Thanks. The word "misery" that disrupted the rhythm has been replaced with "anguish".

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