Lost

My heart is lost in depth of woes,
While sorrows echo loud.
As tears descend with silent throes~
Beneath a veil of cloud.

In the dark I grope for my lost heart,
But it's slipped beyond my firm grip.
Each tear I shed softens its grave,
And deeper it sinks, out of reach.

My anguish drums a hollow grief,
No hope of joy or smile.
My mind is caged in disbelief—
It may remain awhile.

I need no soothsayer to tell me—
I’m already buried in its depth.
My cries are aches without relief,
And I can’t restrain the tears.

It's far beyond all hope or aid,
I know—so others do.
Though cries may rise and voices fade,
None brings the lost I rue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Poteet Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Back a bit late for congratulations on your piece LOST; it is well-written and kudoes too for your placement in the contest. A sad piece which is far too common the thought and words of too many. Very few find hope in the loss they suffer.
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:42 AM
I really appreciate the time taken to read through my poem. Many thanks for your encouraging comment and your congratulatory message.
Bautista Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Nice work. I Enjoy it
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Nice to know Joyce. Thanks for your comment.
Ashley Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Dear Maclawrence, congratulations for your success in Craig's contest with your amazing poem. Your woeful emotion is poignant and palpable and expressed in a beautifully distressed way. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Susan, I appreciate you taking time to read my poem and your wonderful words of encouragement.
Poteet Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Well-done, Maclawrence. I like the alternating stanzas of rhyme and free verse. Your iambic is near perfect. For suggestions, check your soup mail. Your focus is clear and concise. Best of luck in the contest.
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Thanks. The word "misery" that disrupted the rhythm has been replaced with "anguish".
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