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KILLICK ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I am but a tiny boat, one built from dreams and fears, adrift on a sea of choices. Yet, there you are—my killick, the heavy stone that burrows deep into the sand, keeping my boat afloat in the face of the swell of uncertainty and the pull of the tides. Every crashing wave, every brewing storm reminds me of life’s untamed waters. I look within, to the depths where your whisper resides, realizing I’m not lost, but eternally anchored, held fast by the unseen bonds of your guiding Light. Poem written for “Killick Poetry Contest,” Craig Cornish, sponsor, August 1, 2025.

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Date: 8/2/2025 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful use of metaphor here, Sara. We all need an anchor that will always be there for us. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 5:57:00 PM
you, too, are my anchor! <3
Date: 8/2/2025 2:52:00 PM
What a beautiful love poem, Sara! I love the line to where your whisper resides." Such lovely words for your eternal "anchor." As in the ocean, there are many layers to your poem. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs, my friend!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/2/2025 5:38:00 PM
awww, thank you, Sam! I'm grateful for your visit and for your uplifting comments. I appreciate you seeing the layers to this poem--means a great deal to me. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

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