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Into the Deep

Loved you deep and the night

Whispering them into your secret places

Meant to tell you sooner but...

And I screamed to GOD my love

 

Into the deep we plunged and the hunger

Thrashing and skin glistens 

GOD placed his warm hands and love

Faster and rain washing us clean

 

Waking to you and the sun

The curtain sways and carries us

I have to have you and the breeze

I lean with God to mount with you

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/20/2012 10:04:00 PM

Enjoyed this unique write and so glad you were able to save it. I have lost a few good poems because I didn't save them. Thank you for your comments. God Bless Phyl

Dina Cassiano

Date: 7/14/2012 12:15:00 AM

very interesting read. very beautiful. unique.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2012 9:04:00 PM

Patrick, this is a wonderful masterpiece. I'm intrigued with the bright and wonderful image you wake to every morning. That line is a whole poem itself. one never knows what is underneath the word real emotions... your poem is excellent... thank you, for stopping by my poem...always PD

Dylan Wong

Date: 7/12/2012 7:00:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments :) I like the style of this poem. Not really the content so much... But it's written well :)