Patrick Cornwall Poet Free verse

Into the Deep

Loved you deep and the night

Whispering them into your secret places

Meant to tell you sooner but...

And I screamed to GOD my love

 

Into the deep we plunged and the hunger

Thrashing and skin glistens 

GOD placed his warm hands and love

Faster and rain washing us clean

 

Waking to you and the sun

The curtain sways and carries us

I have to have you and the breeze

I lean with God to mount with you

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Phyllis Babcock July 20, 2012 at 10:04 PM Enjoyed this unique write and so glad you were able to save it. I have lost a few good poems because I didn't save them. Thank you for your comments. God Bless Phyl

Dina Cassiano July 14, 2012 at 12:15 AM very interesting read. very beautiful. unique.

Poet Destroyer A July 12, 2012 at 9:04 PM Patrick, this is a wonderful masterpiece. I'm intrigued with the bright and wonderful image you wake to every morning. That line is a whole poem itself. one never knows what is underneath the word real emotions... your poem is excellent... thank you, for stopping by my poem...always PD

Dylan Wong July 12, 2012 at 7:00 PM Thanks for your kind comments :) I like the style of this poem. Not really the content so much... But it's written well :)

David Williams July 12, 2012 at 3:49 PM Patrick, I like the flow, ...well done..David

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 12, 2012 at 12:16 PM certainly a deep and powerful write, Patrick, thnx for your kind visit..jaggy

Richard Palmer July 12, 2012 at 11:47 AM great write Patrick

Marty Owens July 12, 2012 at 10:41 AM Patrick ...I love the thoughts that you have conveyed in this wonderful piece...enjoyed...Marty

Don Johnson July 11, 2012 at 11:24 PM great poetry here mate ..unique