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In the Forthcoming Years

i sit here
within the iridescent glow of trees
beneath the lambent light
of this harvest moon
thoughts twirling
like leaves in summer's breeze
knowing another year
we will soon have aged
as i write to you...

dearest self
do not look to the years of yore
that have made us stand
stronger than the hundred year old oak
on the creek's island
for we have faced
the same turbulence 
as it within life's many storms

upon the bank of time
we have watched many
erode away from life
as the world crumbled
like autumn's leaves around us

we have felt the bitter bite
of death's own hands
piercing, numbness
like winter's breath
made us stifle
beneath countless tears

so look not back
rather forward

walk beneath the sky
as it blushes crimson hues
across the dark canvas
before the first light breaks

dance beneath the soft rain
if only to become renewed
like the flowers of spring
spread your wings
in flight
sing with the birds
in morning's song

walk slow
and admire life
smell the flowers
whenever you can
for life is a mere path
that falls too short for many

admire the beauty of all around
including self
for i have neglected us
for way too long

stand strong
like that oak
and be proud
of you
forevermore 

9/21/2021

Letter to future self
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/8/2023 8:40:00 PM
Enjoyed this Sandy hope you are well.
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Date: 1/23/2023 8:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/30/2022 8:37:00 AM
Visiting once more Sandra, love this!
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Date: 9/20/2022 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful and uplifting write from title to ending ! :)
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Date: 8/22/2022 1:54:00 AM
Sandra, Your poetry never ceases to impress me. A soliloquy that bares your soul expressed brilliantly my friend. This is going into my Faves. I am sorry for this very belated comment. Late May 29th 2021 I lost my son and it has taken a lot of time to get back to poetry. blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2022 1:24:00 AM
Beautiful said! From one Sandra Adams to another that was inspirational! Thank you!
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Date: 3/20/2022 5:19:00 AM
"Standing strong like that oak" - Beautifully written.
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Date: 2/5/2022 5:11:00 AM
Whew! an amazing lyrical journey of self awakening, Sandra...thank you!
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Date: 12/14/2021 9:05:00 PM
Sandra, All best wishes for a favorite poet. Especially as another new year closes in. -Richard
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Date: 12/7/2021 8:26:00 AM
Another soul lifting write Sandy, you always surpass my expectations and they are extremely high. Congrats on another win, hope you are well and write again soon!
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Date: 10/27/2021 2:19:00 PM
Sandra, your tapestry of nature images (summer's breeze, the old oak, autumn leaves, winter cold, the storm, sunrise) woven together with life's trajectory is stunning and so soul-affirming. "So look not back / rather forward" is sound advice, especially when the past weighs us down. Admiring the beauty around us, even within us, is also such good counsel to remember. Positivity and courage seep through in every line. So good to read your exquisite writing again, going in my faves. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 10/17/2021 12:28:00 PM
I miss your amazing poems and our great collaborations... I can feel the angst and slight regret in your words, but like the positive ending... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/22/2021 4:28:00 PM
wow thank you... my muse has been fickle since covid lockdowns... she comes in bits and piece... miss the collaborations and your wonderful words as well...
Date: 10/17/2021 9:00:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A wonderful story/write. Love It. Have a great/blessed autumn day...............
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Date: 10/7/2021 4:15:00 PM
beautiful poem dear poet, we live only once
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Date: 9/30/2021 8:08:00 AM
Sandra, Read your poem for your future self, felt the impact of 'smell the flowers ~ whenever you can ~ for life is a mere path ~~ that falls too short for many' Yeah, wish some had been allowed to stay longer to hear your sage advice. -Richard
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Date: 9/27/2021 7:01:00 AM
Wonderful positive poetry, Love this Sandra.
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Date: 9/23/2021 9:24:00 AM
As always, what a wonderful story/write. You are so right, we must look forward. Love where you say "stand strong like that oak and be proud of you forevermore." If only we could remember that. Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 9/22/2021 7:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful - I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 9/21/2021 4:30:00 PM
JUST wonderful, Sandra. You always come through so amazingly in free verse challenges. Wish I could write more this way!
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Date: 9/21/2021 2:13:00 PM
Such a super piece Sandra, bringing great counsel to your future self, lovely imagery and insightfulness. Take care, blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Date: 9/21/2021 12:40:00 PM
oh my how I do love this poem... it's absolutely wonderful...
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Date: 9/21/2021 12:07:00 PM
A letter to your future self that is full of positivity with a very uplifting message. Best of luck Sandra. Tom
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Date: 9/21/2021 11:01:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed thoughts that would lead anyone towards the future with their head held high and their expectations soaring. Best wishes in the contest my friend. This should definitely be at the top of the winner's list.
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Date: 9/21/2021 9:03:00 AM
A splendid poem. I haven't heard from you lately. Hugs.
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Date: 9/21/2021 8:01:00 AM
This should be at the apex of winning poems. Splendid metaphors deliver your uplifting message in your wonderful signature style, Sandy. Kudos for the write. Wishing you the forevermore.
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