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In Comes Autumn

In the abundance and bounty of our fruited land
my thankful heart overflows with gifts given with love
In the sight of the harvest moons bright helping hand
I feel the root of natures’ essence singing loud from above
played from the equinox on strings by the masters’ band

In shadows short face, black on hallowed ground
earlier comes the presence of these deep ebon nights
In spider webs glistening in fields, to see what is found
while later to rise is the morning, soft mellow lights
so now it is I who am up ‘ere the birds’ chirping sound

In the smell of the gardens tilled freshly asunder
brilliant yellow marries orange with vows from bold red
In bilious clouds holding forth the grand noise of thunder
Autumn is ever upon us when leaves give up their dead
and by fistfuls swirl gaily, dancing in blithe silly wonder

In geese as they honk noisily, heading south over my head
I know summer has come to its yearly ancient demise
In the icy frost as it covers the land like a delicate bedspread
and I hear pumpkins and ghouls send out their eeriest cries
Autumn is sewn dramatically in its’ golden laced thread


9-26-2021

Quintain (Sicilian) Poetry Contest
3rd place premium
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 10/17/2021 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2021 11:31:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed autumn day..................
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Date: 10/15/2021 11:26:00 AM
You filled my senses with the season. Congratulations, Jeanne
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2021 5:36:00 AM
And yours was a beauty. Thank you
Date: 10/15/2021 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jeanne! Such a lovely autumn poem. Keep up the great work!! Love it! Ken
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2021 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Ken. Like for so many others, it's my favorite season.
Date: 10/15/2021 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations Jenne! Your beautiful poem earned “Third” place in my contest. This contest was tough, but you did a great job, well done my friend, Emile.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for the placement Emile. I haven't done a quintain in a while. It was such a fun challenge.
Date: 10/1/2021 1:31:00 PM
A wonderful "In Comes Autumn" write. Autumn should stay around longer. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/2/2021 10:57:00 AM
Isn't it just the most beautiful season? May you have the same.
Date: 9/28/2021 2:11:00 AM
This is so Exquisite Jeanne, to me a poetic journey from the beginning to the end.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/28/2021 4:23:00 AM
What a nice comment Harry. Thanks so much. I'm happy you enjoyed my Autumn scene.
Date: 9/27/2021 7:53:00 AM
Oh excellent Jeanne. A beautifully described picture here of a town through with harvest and now getting ready for a Halloween festival in Fall. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/28/2021 4:22:00 AM
Hi Judy. How wonderful that you enjoyed and could see a picture of the Autumn days coming in. thanks for the comment

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