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Her Gate

Colors start to wake Dancing sparkles on the lake Spring opens her gate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/3/2025 7:56:00 AM
This is so calming and beautiful! I love how just a few words paint such a vivid picture—feels like the world is gently stretching awake with spring. That last line is perfect.
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Date: 6/19/2025 8:24:00 PM
I enjoy this classic haiku.
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 7/8/2025 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Hilda. :)
Date: 6/13/2025 4:00:00 PM
Pretty haiku Marikate
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 6/17/2025 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Tom. It is my first Haiku.

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