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Her Gate


                             Colors start to wake

                             Dancing sparkles on the lake

                             Spring opens her gate

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/6/2025 9:38:00 AM

Your jaunty words make me feel as if spring has sprung! Robert

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/3/2025 7:56:00 AM

This is so calming and beautiful! I love how just a few words paint such a vivid picture—feels like the world is gently stretching awake with spring. That last line is perfect.

Marikate Kingston
Date: 8/4/2025 6:08:00 PM

Hello there Rowena. Thank you so much for your nice comment on my poem :) It was my first Haiku and I was excited to write one. I will check out your poems soon, and again thank you for reading my poem and your nice comment

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/19/2025 8:24:00 PM

I enjoy this classic haiku.

Marikate Kingston
Date: 7/8/2025 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Hilda. :)

Tom Woody

Date: 6/13/2025 4:00:00 PM

Pretty haiku Marikate

Marikate Kingston
Date: 6/17/2025 8:41:00 PM

Thank you Tom. It is my first Haiku.