Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

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less sun, more moon as night time grows seasons change as all things must where did time go? Heaven knows the stars give signs, much to tell us be still, as nature all around us flows

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2025 5:31:00 AM

Creative way to go. Isn't this a hot summer (well, where I live). Yes, all things change even when they don't look like they are changing. Thanks for sharing this one with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/20/2025 4:32:00 PM

a beautifully flowing poem! Well done for the contest! Best wishes with your placement! hugs

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 4:49:00 AM

Thank you! Xo